As you have just seen I verified the official word count on the novel called Blip.
Blip has become such a fun chance to grow creatures, spacemen, heroines, heroes, bad guys, bossy people, and more. Not only all that; I also get to be called a NaNoWriMo Winner.
I can assure you this year has been almost impossible. I am so proud of myself for completing this commitment. There was a death in the family that took me away from the computer for 7 days. I wrote on my phone then transferred it to Scrivener when I got home. I also am working on getting Sojourner McConnell’s first children’s book, Who’s That in the Cat Pajamas? ready for publication. That didn’t even go into the final word count.
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So this morning as I finished chapter sixteen, I added in the word count and voila! I was over by almost a thousand.
If you have stayed with me this far, I think I will give a small taste of Blip in its rawest form. I relish your feedback. Please let me know what you think of my guy.
The young black-haired, creamy-skinned man sat at the metal table in the windowless room. With odd green eyes which sloped into an exotic shape. His wide lips were moving in and out between his hidden teeth. An odd tick the soldier thought. The young man looked over at the soldier near the door as if he could tell what the soldier was thinking. He shrugged slightly, raised one recently crafted eyebrow, then he spoke for the first time.
“To what do I owe the pleasure of being caged in this room? Are you armed? Do you plan on shooting me? Are you afraid?”
The soldier at the door looked away from this penetrating eyes. The soldier, LT. Brad Davies, looked at the young man and shook his head.
“The General and his assistant will be here momentarily.”
“My name is Hiram. Well, I go by Hiram here. My real name is unpronounceable by mere humans. It involves clicks, gurgles and a sound that only a body with two larynx’s can form.“ Slowly blinking his green eyes, he continued.
“Seeing as you were born on this blue ball you call Earth; I will assume you have only one larynx. So you may call me Hiram.”
“But I digress; I came here in 1949 and have lived here for the over 66 years. I have moved about in the last six decades and never remained too long in one place, since I do not age like your frail bodies. I am one hundred years old, yet since I have a lifespan of five hundred, I am what you would consider twenty.” His eyes never wandered from the soldier’s face yet, Brad felt a vibration in the room as if machinery was being used. He knew there was no equipment being used in this room. Brad felt more than a little uncomfortable.
“I have lived in many countries, but I tend to move about the United States more often than others. The freedom of the interstate makes it easy to set up a new identity as needed. My neurovisage has allowed me to remain undetected. I was fortunate to excel in the skill which allowed me to be sent for this mission.” Casually stroking the table top with his fingers, he continued in his strangely quiet voice.
“I am still curious as to how you caught up with me. I am from Insorna a non-ringed planet with five lunar satellites, located in the galaxy you call Andromeda. My intelligence is of course superior. This one fact makes my capture even more astounding.” Hiram bit his lip with the flat edge of his bottom teeth.
“Before I proceed, will you tell me how you came to know about me?”
Now that Brad knew this man was not as he appeared, he was more conscious of Hiram’s unusual facial features. Brad was not ordered to engage in conversation, only to guard the door to prevent escape.
Hiram blinked his green eyes slowly in a nonchalant way, letting Brad know that he was not concerned. He had escaped being noticed all these years, and he would soon be back off the grid. He had supreme homogenization skills.
Brad tried not to look at the mirror, he tried to remain calm. He had no idea what he was supposed to do now. So he spoke again.
“They will answer your questions, perhaps.”
Hiram knew that he would soon be free. His contacts in the monitoring station, on the far side of the moon, would not allow him to become a prisoner. They were aware of his situation. He would be protected. Of that, he was confident.
“I eagerly await the General and his assistant. I am able to detect that they are watching me from the other side of that window. Feel free to join me, General. I am ready to speak face to face.”
Congratulation…it is a great achievement…
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Thank you so much for reading this and taking the time to comment.
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Congratulations on all your accomplishments – Blip sounds like an exciting story – lots of intriguing unknowns in your sample!
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It is very freeing to write about those unknowns. 🙂 They just keep popping up and I keep writing them. 🙂 thank you so much for reading about our guy and taking the time to comment. I also appreciate your kind words!
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Vicki, this is wondrous!
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Thank you! I am feeling quite accomplished at this point. 🙂
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Congratulations! I tip my hat to your accomplishments!
I enjoyed meeting your young man in this teaser sample. I was drawn right into the story. I am looking forward to more. Happy writing!
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What a wonderful thing to read first thing in the morning! Thank you very much!
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My pleasure!
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Congratulations, Vicki. This is a great accomplishment. I read your extract with great interest – most intriguing.
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Thank you 🙂 I appreciate that so much!!
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Congrats! Blip is going grap a lot of readers!
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That is a really exciting comment to read! Thank you!!
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I totally forgot to go in an register myself as a winner. I didn’t technically count my hours, but I’m sure I got in the 40 which was my goal. Probably because I wasn’t at my computer but out knocking on people’s doors and interviewing about my subject matter. Congratulations on all the writing you are getting accomplished.
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I believe you can contact them and they will help you with the verification. Thank you! I am trying to stay focused. I think your research is even more impressive than my dash to the finish line!
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WAHOOOO!!! Congrats Vicki! This is awesome! 🙂
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THnak you! I love meeting a goal. I didn’t do so well in November, this helped build up confidence.
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YES!! Good for you, I love it when I nail my goals! This coming Nov. will be my first go at a NaNo, so hopefully I can give you a run for your money 😉 lol
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Oh we can encourage each other! Try out in July and practice.
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Absolutely 🙂 Thanks for the link! I was a little bummed out that I couldn’t manage the time in April, so I’m definitely holding my breath for Nov… And I’ll surely be reading Blip 😉 Congrats
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Thank you! 🙂 Blip should be out in November. That is another goal.
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you got this! 🙂
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